Tuesday, 2 October 2018

The room was a mess

The room was mess

A mountain of clothes making a misty feeling in the air. There was mountains of stuff on the floor, no longer being able to see the carpet. Makeup and Lego bits scattered all around the room. Everywhere I looked, looked like a bomb of makeup and lego exploded leaving a mess all around. The carpet in the room looked like dust mites lurking in it. It felt like I was stuck in a rubbish dump. The room was misty, dusty and damp I could barely breathe.Related image

Tuesday, 4 September 2018

Saturn

                        Saturn
Saturn is a long, long way away from the sun and Earth. It's the sixth planet from the sun and the fourth planet away from Earth. From the Earth it can be easily visible. Saturn's average distance from the sun is 1.4 billion kilometres.  It is 58,232km in diameter which makes it the second largest planet in our Solar System.

Saturn moves like Earth but with some differences. Like Earth it orbits the sun but it takes 29 years. Saturn the day will be 10 hours and 42 minutes long. Saturn rotates faster than earth and Saturn spin anti clockwise and Earth spins clockwise.    Saturn's surface degrees is 139 Celsius. Its gravity is 10.44 meter per second. Saturn has 62 moons and 7 rings Saturn also was named after Roman mythology in 1610.

Monday, 3 September 2018

Hockey day

 Hockey day

On Wednesday 1 of August the year 5-7 went to the Greymouth hockey turf. 24 schools went to attend the event the people that went from our school (Kumara School) where Carlos, Priya, Isaac, Jack, Rylee, Jess and Autumn. We all enjoyed the tournament we drew the final with Awahono School zero zero. A big thank you to the people that gave up there time to come help and thank you to Jack O'Connor for arranging this event.


Saturday, 1 September 2018

My amazing gymnastics writing


Welcome to the stage Jamielee Sanson please make your mark on the floor. I popped out of the crowd and leaped on the gymnastics floor.
The floor was hard as concrete. I can hear my heart beating like thunder going boom boom. This was new to me. I can hear the silence of the crowd wondering if I'm going fail or not. You can do it Jamie saying to myself in a whisper. I could smell the dusty dirty floor. I saw the crowd with disbelief faces. Then I jumped into action and flipped into the upside down splits. I don't want to hit the ground. I can do it then for some reason it was over. I landed on my feet like a champion gymnast landing a triple double flip. I couldn't believe it suddenly the crowd went wild I heard cheering from all around the room I heard it everywhere.
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What I found challenging about this writing was not to write a story. By Jamielee
And the thing I loved about writing gymnastics is that I really enjoy doing it during lunch limes and morning teas

Friday, 31 August 2018

Mars

Mars


Mars is in our solar system. It is 6780 km in diameter which is half the size of Earth.  This makes it the second smallest planet in our Solar System. Mars is 227.8 million km from the sun.  It is the fourth planet from the sun. it is the last inner planet. It takes 687 days for mars to orbit the sun.

Mars looks different than other planets. On  Mars there are two moons called Phobos and Deimos. Mars has a volcano called Olympus which is 27 km in height and is 3 times taller than Mount Everest. Mars is called the red planet because the colour of mars is blood red.
Mars is made out of rock iron and dust.
Mars history goes back a long way. It is named after the roman god of war. An Italian astronomer called Galileo was the first person to see Mars with a telescope. It can be seen in the night sky without the use of a telescope. Mariner 9 got launched on to mars in may 30 1971.

We were learning to use topic sentences and describe some of the characteristics and fetchers of the different components of the solar system

Thursday, 30 August 2018

My Cool Descriptive Writing


My Cool Descriptive Writing



I leaped into the air. My hair pushed into the ground, It looked freaky when I was upside down. I could hear heaps of people cheering my name, I whispered to myself "i can do this!" and then I leaped to the floor and gone upside down for 3 seconds. I was scared, but i was brave and proud of myself. My heart was beating so fast like thunder.i see people bow at me. 

Wednesday, 29 August 2018

swimming

swimming  
  Getting ready to jump in to the ice cold water.
Feeling terrified I can hear splashing from
other people when I dived in.
When I dived in I could taste the chlorine it
tastes weird.  

Tuesday, 28 August 2018

My Amazing Descriptive Writing.

Oh my goodness, look at that thing it's huge! My eyebrows are curling over my eyes as im squinting as my mouth drops to the ground. This is the biggest creature I have ever seen in my whole life, But it's also the grossest. Its big and black with heaps of legs and its has hair sticking up off of its head. At first I didn't even think this is real. My hands are shaking as my brain is sending a tingling sensation down through my spine. My knees don't want to be standing up anymore they are shaking and wobbling too much. My legs automatically start moving backwards away from whatever that thing is. I don't want to be near it anymore, I have never seen that thing before.

I kinda found it hard to think of some of the bigger words i have used, i thought to myself i haven't really ever used these words so im going to use them. i enjoyed writing this bit of writing because i like kinda challenging things so i think this was kinda fun. When i have heaps of words in my head i just like to put them all out into a doc.

Uranus




show don't tell amazing writing

show don't tell amazing writing

We are learning to show don't tell in our writing.
I found it challenging to write a lot.  I liked to write this because I could say how  I would feel if it was me.


Monday, 20 August 2018

Sophie Pascoe


We are learning to find information by skimming scanning

Friday, 17 August 2018

Descriptive writing

WALT:write descriptive writing

As I popped up I taste the salty bubbly,aerated, foamy water.
My feet just landed on the sticky slippery surfboard.
I smell the wet seaweed. it smells as bad as dirty rubbish.
As I stuck my head up   I stopped for a minute as I smiled my face is aching.
I feel like my face is splitting apart.

Wednesday, 28 February 2018

Explorers

Room One have been sharing what we know so far about explorers. Have a look at what we think we know so far....