Friday 30 November 2018

We Are Learning To Write Descriptive Writing


 
   Sunset                         
In the holidays my family and I  went to the beach and watched the sunset.

I step onto the beach. Pink and orange clouds as the sunset takes place. The warm breeze feels like a blanket over me. My head leans to the side as I relax. The sun slowly  goes down then disappears and went dark and quite.

" I wonder what tomorrow's sunset will be like" I say to myself.

1 comment:

  1. Hi room 1 Kumara school, my name is Riley and I just read the sunset poem/writing, the writing was really interesting and i liked it, I love going to the beach and watching the sunset and this inspired me to get outside more. From Riley

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