Room 1 Camp

Bang! Crash! As I on the paddle board I feel the water hit me. I feel alive.The only thing that is going through my head is how refreshing the water will be. Splash! I fall in. A gigantic smile runs through my face.


I feel refreshed. As the salty aerated water runs down my throat I gag. I see the slimy,green rocks at the bottom of the water.I hear people yell in the distance. It was an exhilarating experience.

We are learning to write a descriptive writing

descriptive writing

We are learning to write a descriptive writing 


Bang the race starts. I whooped off the diving board my
friends shouting at me! All I here is Go! Go! Go! We can win this! I'm so under pressure.I can just smell  that bubbly, salty, gooey chlorine. Just listening to the carbonated water I can't do it I just can't. Yes you can someone says to me in my head. My mind is exploding with thoughts. I won! I won!

We Are Learning To Write Descriptive Writing

     Sunset                         

In the holidays my family and I  went to the beach and watched the sunset.

I step onto the beach. Pink and orange clouds as the sunset takes place. The warm breeze feels like a blanket over me. My head leans to the side as I relax. The sun slowly  goes down then disappears and went dark and quite.

" I wonder what tomorrow's sunset will be like" I say to myself.

The room was a mess

The room was mess

A mountain of clothes making a misty feeling in the air. There was mountains of stuff on the floor, no longer being able to see the carpet. Makeup and Lego bits scattered all around the room. Everywhere I looked, looked like a bomb of makeup and lego exploded leaving a mess all around. The carpet in the room looked like dust mites lurking in it. It felt like I was stuck in a rubbish dump. The room was misty, dusty and damp I could barely breathe.

Saturn

                        Saturn

Saturn is a long, long way away from the sun and Earth. It's the sixth planet from the sun and the fourth planet away from Earth. From the Earth it can be easily visible. Saturn's average distance from the sun is 1.4 billion kilometres.  It is 58,232km in diameter which makes it the second largest planet in our Solar System.

Saturn moves like Earth but with some differences. Like Earth it orbits the sun but it takes 29 years. Saturn the day will be 10 hours and 42 minutes long. Saturn rotates faster than earth and Saturn spin anti clockwise and Earth spins clockwise.    Saturn's surface degrees is 139 Celsius. Its gravity is 10.44 meter per second. Saturn has 62 moons and 7 rings Saturn also was named after Roman mythology in 1610.

Hockey day

 Hockey day

On Wednesday 1 of August the year 5-7 went to the Greymouth hockey turf. 24 schools went to attend the event the people that went from our school (Kumara School) where Carlos, Priya, Isaac, Jack, Rylee, Jess and Autumn. We all enjoyed the tournament we drew the final with Awahono School zero zero. A big thank you to the people that gave up there time to come help and thank you to Jack O'Connor for arranging this event.

My amazing gymnastics writing

Welcome to the stage Jamielee Sanson please make your mark on the floor. I popped out of the crowd and leaped on the gymnastics floor.
The floor was hard as concrete. I can hear my heart beating like thunder going boom boom. This was new to me. I can hear the silence of the crowd wondering if I'm going fail or not. You can do it Jamie saying to myself in a whisper. I could smell the dusty dirty floor. I saw the crowd with disbelief faces. Then I jumped into action and flipped into the upside down splits. I don't want to hit the ground. I can do it then for some reason it was over. I landed on my feet like a champion gymnast landing a triple double flip. I couldn't believe it suddenly the crowd went wild I heard cheering from all around the room I heard it everywhere.


What I found challenging about this writing was not to write a story. By Jamielee
And the thing I loved about writing gymnastics is that I really enjoy doing it during lunch limes and morning teas