"Arghh they're all so big!
Don't touch me with your slimy nose or else!
You're so close I'm felling claustrophobic. Stand back you evil monster!" Says M&M in fright.
"Calm down dude. We are just look to see if you're safe to stay." Mikki says.
"Trust me I am a good evil monster." M&M says letting his secret out.
"ATTACK!" Mikki yells!
By Mikayla
Hi Kumara School, I'm Emma from Paroa
ReplyDeleteI like your piece of writing and that you added some pictures
could you next time please minimize the pictures more.
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Hi i'm Alisi from Wesley Primary School I really like the way you made it very funny and interesting to read.This reminds me of when i went to the farm and I called the cows monsters because they were so huge.Maybe next time you could write a bit more about your journey.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Alisi from Wesley Primary School I like the way you made it very funny and interesting.This reminds me of when I went a farm and I called the cows monsters because the were huge.Maybe next time you could write a bit more.
ReplyDeletehi my name is dallas and i am from wesley primary school i like the way that you put the toy on the grass and its just there really funny.
ReplyDeletehi my name is dallas and i am from wesley primary school i like the way that you put the toy on the grass and its just there really funny.
ReplyDeletehi my name is dallas and i am from wesley primary school i like the way that you put the toy on the grass and its just there really funny.
ReplyDeleteh my name is viliami and i am from wesley primary school and i really like how you put the toy on the grass and looks a bit fun for the cows
ReplyDeleteHi my name is anaseini and i am a year 5 at Wesley primary school. I like the way you put the little statue of the beaver standing on the grass. it made me think of when i made a scarecrow when i was little. maybe next time you could show a picture of the cows. running around the field.
ReplyDeleteHi there my name is Paula and i am a student from room 3 in Wesley Primary School. I really like how you named your own toy M&M. It made me think of my little toy when i was a small kid. Have u thought about telling everyone why you made it?
ReplyDeleteHi there my name is Paula and i am a student from room 3 in Wesley Primary School. I really like how you named your own toy M&M. It made me think of my little toy when i was a small kid. Have u thought about telling everyone why you made it?
ReplyDeletei liked it
ReplyDeleteHello, My name is Jess, I'm a year 6 and I go to Ohaeawai Primary school. This experiment is super funny, I really like it. I hope you could do more experiments like this! See Ya!
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is Sky I am a year 5 at Ohaeawai Primary school. This was so funny I looked at it ten times before I thought to write a comment.
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Hello. My name is Terei. I'm from Ohaeawai School. I really like the little monster. Is that monster from Monsters vs Aliens, the movie? I hope you had fun making it. Bye.
ReplyDeleteHi room 1. It looks like M&M is going to be In trouble. I wonder what happened after M&M let out his secret. I hope M&M will not get eaten by a Cow.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Ruby I like evil monster he is so cool. it is very funny. Mabe add more writing to it.
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